Band-Aid Stylebook

BAND-AID AP STYLEBOOK
By Dave Feldman, The San Diego
Union-Tribune
and Stan Ketterer, Oklahoma State University
This stylebook is a summary of the most commonly used items in the Associated
Press Stylebook and Libel Manual. It includes helpful reminders, but it is
not a substitute for it. When in doubt, look it up in the AP Stylebook
(a) Nearly all formal titles are capitalized BEFORE
the name, lowercased after the name.
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I voted for President George W. Bush. |
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Mayor Larry Brown favored the idea. |
(b) Few titles are abbreviated (e.g., don't abbreviate
detective, prosecuting attorney and president.)
Titles that ARE abbreviated (e.g. such as
Gov., Sen., Rev., Dr.) are abbreviated when they come BEFORE
the name.
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Sen. Don Nichols is a Republican. |
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Gov. Frank Keating opposed the bill. |
(c) Use Dr. for medical doctors. If you use Dr. for academics, specify the
specialty to avoid confusion with a medical doctor.
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Dr. Jack Kevorkian assisted in the suicide. |
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Dr. Joey Senat, an assistant professor of journalism, discussed
censorship. |
(d) Professor is NEVER abbreviated. Ensure that
the rank is correct, e.g. professor, assistant professor, associate professor:
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WRONG: Prof. John
Catsis |
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RIGHT: Associate
Professor John Catsis |
(e) Use "the Rev." before ministers on first
reference.
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The Rev. Jesse Jackson
was arrested during the protest concerning the execution. |
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Services, conducted by the Rev. Ted Milton, will be 1 p.m.
Saturday at Zion Methodist Church, 224 Oak St. |
(f) When the title comes AFTER the name, spell
out the title but DO NOT capitalize it.
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Larry Brown, the mayor, cut the ribbon. |
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The bill was vetoed by Frank Keating, the governor. |
(g) When the title stands alone, spell out the title and DO
NOT capitalize it.
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The pope will visit next week. |
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The president vetoed the bill. |
(h) An EXCEPTION: When a title is used before
a name, but there is punctuation (such as a comma)
between the title and the name, do not capitalize the title.
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I listened to the district attorney, Kevin Crane. |
(i) Long titles go best AFTER the name:
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Deputy Undersecretary for Consumer Affairs Maureen Maxwell
gave a talk on managing your budget. |
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GOES MUCH BETTER AS: |
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Maureen Maxwell, deputy undersecretary for consumer affairs,
gave a talk on managing your budget. |
(j) On legislators _ senators, representatives, etc. _ set off their party
affiliation and state (or area) with commas, NOT
parentheses. Do not put a period after the party affiliation:
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U.S. Rep. Wes Watkins, R-Okla., said .... |
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State Sen. Mike Morgan, D-Stillwater, introduced ... |
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Addresses and Streets
(a) Abbreviate only with an EXACT, numbered address.
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901 Ninth St. |
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BUT: The gym is on
Ninth Street. |
(b) On exact addresses, abbreviate the direction:
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555 N. Garth Ave. |
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333 W. Broadway |
(c) CAPITALIZE the name of the street BUT only ABBREVIATE the following in
EXACT addresses:
(This can be remembered as BAS, which is part
of a word.)
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999 Stadium Blvd. |
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767 Milestone Ave. |
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545 Hitt St. |
ALL THE REST ARE SPELLED
OUT and CAPITALIZED.
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444 Boomer Road |
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334 Smiley Lane |
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Dates
When SPECIFIC DATES are used, abbreviate the
month. Put commas after the day of the week, the month and the year. If you
only have the month and day, no commas are required.
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Joe Anders died Monday, Jan. 6, 1997, of cancer. |
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The banquet will be Oct. 10 in the Student Union. |
With NO SPECIFIC DATE, spell out the month. When
you have the month and the year, DO NOT use a
comma between them:
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February is chilly. |
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She received her last letter from him in December 1994. |
EXCEPTION: The "shorter" five months of spring
and summer are not abbreviated: March, April, May, June, July. MEMORY
TIP: 5 months and 5 letters or fewer.
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She changed the wedding date from May 10 to June 14. |
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(a) Capitalize River or Dam as part of a proper name:
BUT, in plurals, DO NOT
capitalize the river or dam:
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Arkansas and Mississippi rivers |
(That same lower-case for plurals applies to counties, streets, etc.)
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First and 12th streets |
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Payne and Pawnee counties |
(b) Capitalize the specific regions: Midwest, East, West Coast, South, etc.
But NOT compass directions:
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Oklahoma is part of the Southwest. |
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They were headed east on Interstate 70. |
(c) Capitalize official names , including City Commission, Commerce Committee,
Congress, Senate, House, General Assembly, Republican Party, and Democratic
Party. Capitalize words derived from official names, such as Republicans and
Democrats.
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The City Commission approved the ordinance. |
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The Democrats control the Commerce Committee. |
BUT LOWERCASE when when not using the official
name, often on second and subsequent references.
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The commission passed the measure by a 4-3 vote. |
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Despite Democratic opposition, the committee approved the
bill. |
(d) Capitalize: Branches of the US (not foreign) military -- Army,
Navy, Marines, etc.
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She served in the Army |
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The Mexican navy picked the survivors. |
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Abbreviations
(a) Do not use acronyms unless they are familiar to your readers. Spell
out governmental agencies on first reference, and abbreviate on second reference.
DO NOT use brackets or periods.
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Federal Communications Commission. The FCC issued the
ruling. |
FBI and CIA can stand alone anytime. But try to avoid alphabet soup.
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WRONG:
Oklahoma State University (OSU). The OSU ... |
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RIGHT: Oklahoma State University. The OSU .... |
(c) As a noun, United States is spelled out. As an adjective, it is abbreviated
US:
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The United States opposed the treaty because US companies
would pay higher tariffs. |
(d) SPELL OUT the names of all of the states
when they stand ALONE.
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She went on a ski trip in Colorado. |
BUT abbreviate the state names when they are
used with a city: EXCEPTION: There are eight
states that are not abbreviated: The two that are disconnected _ Alaska and
Hawaii _ ) and the six with five letters or fewer: Idaho, Iowa, Maine, Ohio,
Texas and Utah.
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We landed in Waco, Texas. |
DO NOT USE POSTAL ABBREVIATIONS, except for addresses
for memorials in obituaries.
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WRONG: They traced the
car to Sand Springs, OK.
RIGHT: They traced the car to Sand Springs,
Okla. |
(e) No periods are used with mph, as in 35 mph, nor with mm, as in 35mm.
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After chasing the car at speeds exceeding 100 mph, officers
found a 9mm handgun when the searched the vehicle, police said. |
(f) Abbreviate company, corporation, limited and incorporated at the end of
a company's name. In most cases the Inc. is unnecessary, but use it when it
is an important part of the name, such as Time Inc.
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The Phillips Petroleum Co. increased its market share. |
(g) Do not use courtesy titles, except on second and other references in an
obituary.
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WRONG: Mrs. Janet Reno
was attorney general.
RIGHT: Janet Reno was attorney general.
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(H) Abbreviate junior and senior with names, and do not use a comma
to separate them..
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Robert Downey Jr. starred in "Back to School." |
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(a) In general, SPELL OUT one
through nine, use figures for 10 above.
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He invited 12 guests to the party but only nine showed
up. |
EXCEPTIONS: Always use figures for these:
(b) Ages:
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John, 7, ran away. John is 7 years old. |
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Jenny, a 9-year-old girl, ran away, too. |
(c) Dimensions:
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The 7-foot-2 center weighed 230 pounds. |
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The waves were 6 feet high. |
(d) Percentages:
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4 percent (NOTE that percent is ONE word.) |
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1 percent to 5 percent (USE the word "percent" every time.)
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(e) Time:
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6 p.m. (NOT 6:00 p.m.; p.m. has periods and is and lowercased.) |
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8 tonight (p.m. would be redundant) |
(f) Street numbers:
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9 Quinton Court
BUT 88 Ninth Street |
(g) Day of the month:
(h)Do not start a sentence with a figure.
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WRONG: 70 runners
straggled in. |
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RIGHT: Seventy runners
straggled in. |
EXCEPTION: AP allows you to start a sentence
with a year:
But it's best to avoid even this.
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(a) Use the dollar sign ... $ $ $ $
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$10, $1,000, $90,000 (NOT
$90 thousand or 90 thousand dollars) |
(b) Use exact figures up to $1 million. On figures more than $1 million,
use:
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$1 million, $2.7 million, $6.28 billion |
(c) Round off, unless an exact figure is required.
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$9,853,159 can usually become $9.85 million. |
(d) Repeat the word with ranges:
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WRONG: $8 to $10
million |
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RIGHT: $8 million
to $10 million |
(e) For amounts less than a dollar, use a number and SPELL
OUT cents:
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A Coke costs 25 cents during finals week. |
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(a) Nicknames are enclosed in quotes, NOT
parentheses:
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WRONG: Jesse
(The Body) Ventura |
| RIGHT: Jesse "The
Body" Ventura or "The Gov" |
(b) Put quotation marks around the titles of movies, plays, books (but
not the Bible or reference works), operas, songs, TV programs,
speeches and works of art. But NOT around
the names of newspapers or magazines.
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The editorial in the Daily Oklahoman supported the
bond issue. |
| He loved to watch "Saturday Night Live." |
(c) When using two initials instead of a first name, do not put a space
between them:
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This page was created by Assistant Professor Stan Ketterer on May 8,
2000, and last updated Jan. 19.